Introduction:
Sleep is needed for high school students
main point 1: mental illness such as depression, bipolar disorder, anxiety disorder, etc.
Sleep is needed for high school students
- The body's time to restart and helps immune system along with memorization
- When I wake up super early I can't function the same as I would if I had more time to sleep
- Athletes in high school
- sleep deprivation
Transition: Lets take a look at how mental illness can occur to not enough sleep and the benefits of having the right amount of sleep
Body:
main point 2: some high schools already have something called "late start" which means they start school a little later on specific days.
- My high school had late starts on thursday's where our school started at 9:20
- I would notice how much happier and ready every one was for school
- there are stats to show this improved the health of students
- when the body doesn't get to boost the brain mental illnesses can occur
- sleep deprivation makes it not possible to gain memorization of things learned in school
students have a lot going on after school such as athletics, family obligations, jobs, etc.
After reading your proposal argument outline I can see that you provide an interesting point of view on how we should push back times for high schoolers. Of course the proposal definently needs more research and a bit more writing to truly describe the point of view of where you're getting your main points. Also I do see you have a very concrete start which is always good, and I do look forward to listening to your speech or proposal argument.
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