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My topic is going to be how school is affected by amount of sleep. In high school we woke up at 6 am every day and didn't have enough sleep to function throughout the day. In college however, people are able to sleep longer making their moods lifted and their studies better. I want to see the difference in peoples moods and school work to see if sleep affects that.
1. Do you feel that your mood is affected by sleep?
2. Do you feel that when you sleep longer its better for your school work?
I am going to research about high school students mainly because that's where this issue is a bigger problem but I also want to tie in college students because we are also affected and can be the main answer to this question since we are able to wake up later.

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  1. 1. Yes your topic is narrow enough to collect data within a given time period, I do see your point and the focus of the topic.
    2. You don't have open-ended questions which can lead to a short analysis on your topic. So maybe ask why you think so in your questions to give more of an analysis.
    3. Yes, except idk if you should sample high school students when we are on a college campus, it may be easier to sample college students. Now I see your doing research, do you mean like sample or just looking up online how sleep is affected?


    Overall though I think your topic is strong, I think you just need to fix somethings to make it even better!

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